Tuesday, August 24, 2010

4th of July

On the night of the 4th of July I was laying on the wet prickly grass by a lake in Sacramento, the fireworks exploding  far above my head.  The colors were so amazing. There were lots of different fireworks ones that exploded in circles, and many others too.  The sound of the fireworks exploding was so loud it hurt my ears and seemed to shake the ground like thunder.  It was a great night and I hope that I can do it again next year.

2 comments:

  1. You got the assignment. I would like to read even more about that moment. How did the air feel? How could you describe the explosions?

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  2. Nice description. how could you describe it a little more. I like the line "The sound of the fireworks exploding was so loud it hurt my ears and seemed to shake the ground like thunder." this really describes how it felt.

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